Welcome to my life's story.

Not a big fan of emo poetry

It was okay, I think it has potential to do better though

P.S.

If this is exactly your life story you describe, the feeling you have today, wouldn't you want to write the road you want to live?

In my opinion, I think emos are a bunch of cowards, trying to run away from the fear. Is it not true that the only rememedy that has no salvation is to face fear itself?

Why don't you face the noise if it's inevitable?

Why can't you be the one you always wanted to be?

To me, emos are like selfish giant babies that whine a lot...

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"Science is for those who learn; Poetry, for those who know"
Joseph Roux?

Why don't you just keep your selfish feelings to yourself? No one wants to hear you bitch about they way they feel or live. Just shut your fucking mouth and go rule your own life.

PS To me, you're just a stupid little bitch who says they have a perfect life and have tons of friends, but truthfully, you are imperfect and without a single friend or companion.

Well it is DA and your poem is open to critical criticism and such, so would that still make me selfish?

By the way you sound silly, you're just making silly acccusations to make yourself feel better thinking that I go around saying my life is perfect and such...

But maybe you're right? Maybe I don't have a lot of friends even though I go around saying that I have lots of friends and such.

But does that really mean that I'm imperfect?

Does that really make that introverted child imperfect?

Does it really matter how many friends somebody has? Does that make them perfect?

If these selfish feelings you solely describes makes me imperfect and with no friends.

Than sign me up, because apparently what I do makes me happy

In this world of facades for you to openly express your feelings of doubt, misery, and despair. To make the other opposition feel inferior to you by labeling another person so that it makes you look a lot better than you. And just simply looking at your profile, you get sad often don't you?

To compare this stupid little bitch who says they have a perfect life, to this person who whines and complains about their life

You are no better than this label you gave me or at least, this label is just as equal as you are

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"Science is for those who learn; Poetry, for those who know"
Joseph Roux?

And do you know what I say to that?
Go to Hell.

And to all you people who think I'm emo and I cut myself... I'm not and I don't.

And that's all you could've had said

Instead of going all bananas and stuff on me and losing your marbles

If you want to hear it, I'll say it

I'm sorry that I sounded like a jerk and I didn't like your genre of poetry
I'm sorry if I labeled you a emo and made you upset
And I'm SOOOOOOO sorry that I retaliated back at your comment so that I could feed my ego

To tell you the truth, even if you're a emo or not, I think that everybody tries to be a good person when they're trying to get over their problems. And I don't blame you for expressing your feelings right? It sucks to bottle up all those feelings. It must suck, to express yourself and than to have other's attack you, making you want to crawl back to your bed. And if you were confused of why I called you selfish, I guess I should explain even if you understood. When you look at your stereotypical emo, is like I said, all they do is whine. When they whine, they always talk about how they're life is all crapy and stuff like that and how everything is going crashing down on them. They think they're important, that their problems outweighs everybody else and they need the help more than ever. But did you really think I was playing the smallest violin in the world? This is why emo people are selfish childs.

So I guess we all make that kind of silly assumptions don't we?

"The apparel of a men oft proclaims the men?"
- Hamlet? (William Shakespear)

We always take notice of what we see in our eyes, but we never take in the fact of what they're hiding.

When you look at my avatar and made the assumption that I was some snobby child who thinks they know everything, you probably thought I was trying to be some happy-hippy person who only thinks of soft kittens. But that last comment I made revealed my facade that I purposely hid.

So I take everything back of what I said

And Would you so kindly, as to accept my apology?

P.S.

Even though I said all those bad things about you and labeling you emo and stuff like that, if you want, I could help you with your poems, since you are a "Emotional Poet" I can show you how to write poems vividly so that people can feel that gooey lovely feeling or that sharp pain in their heart that you want your readers to feel

Or you can either grow and develop your own style of writing

It's your choice

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"Science is for those who learn; Poetry, for those who know"
Joseph Roux?

Thanks but no thanks. I don't want your apology and I don't want your help. I do things on my own and I write as I feel to do so. I meant everything that I said and if you didn't, you had no right to say so.

i really like it
and i hate it when you feel something like that and you manage not to act on it and yet youre still branded emo for thinking it.
and well done for beating the ever-loving shit outta scary clappy chibi monkey person
(and hi, i'm tilly)

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Accident Prone Brunette Seeks Gorgeous Vegetarian Vampire To Open Her Eyes To A Whole New World...
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My Scars Are Visible. Deal With It.
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and kisses are a better fate
than wisdom
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We'll Carry On...